The Gettysburg Address (Part 2) with Larry McEnerney

Larry McEnerney | European Speechwriter Network

Abstract

A writing-programme director continues a seminar on a very short nineteenth-century address, moving from how coherence is built to how a problem is constructed and why almost nothing taught about openings does that work. The argument is that writing is not a clean window onto content, that people are persuaded while understanding incompletely, and that the instruction to state a thesis triggers no structure at all in the head of the person receiving it.

• The word thesis triggers no structure in a listener's head.
• A problem outside the audience can be declined where one inside them cannot.
• The word background is the most damaging in writing instruction, because stability cues nothing.
• Writing almost always starts from the solution rather than from the problem.
• Problem-solution is more persuasive than argument structure, not a simplified wrapper for it.

Below, the seminar is mapped in the order it was delivered: thirty-seven chapter summaries, each headed with the moment it begins and the claim made there, with the lines that carry it quoted in place. The middle stretch is the anxiety-and-relief cycle, micro-problems inside single sentences, and the not-X-but-Y construction a concision pass would delete. The last third handles what to do when the audience already agrees, or rejects the solution outright. The personal-branding layer and the questions follow.

Chapter summaries

01:01 - Writing techniques are a toolkit, and half the skill is knowing when not to use them

Writing techniques are a toolkit, and half the skill is knowing when not to use them. Technique is selected against a purpose, never applied as a standard.

"I think of writing techniques as toolkits that writers can use. Sometimes they should use them, sometimes they shouldn't depending on what they need to accomplish."

— 01:04

It is stated with its limit: sometimes they should be used and sometimes not.

02:03 - Clear and organised rank below valuable and deserve to be written smaller

Clear, organised, persuasive and valuable are ranked, and the first two deserve to be written smaller than they are. Only the top of the stack decides whether anything else gets to matter.

"what I really would like to do is make the clear and organized even smaller, like tiny little letters, because for me, the most important thing is valuable"

— 02:21

On the table: the same four-line chart used for thirty years of consulting.

The case in front of the room is a senior university administrator asked two questions and conceding both.

04:18 - Writing is not a clean window onto content, so value is never content alone

Value is assumed to be a judgement of content, with writing as a clean window onto it — and that is false. There are writing techniques that cause readers to perceive value, independent of the content behind them.

"there are writing techniques that create value, that cause readers or listeners to think something is valuable by the writing"

— 04:46

The case in front of the room is the charge that it amounts to cheating.

"They might be right. Maybe it is shabby".

05:49 - People are persuaded while understanding incompletely, so chasing clarity can defeat persuasion

People agree, are persuaded, and find things valuable while understanding them incompletely — so chasing clarity can defeat all three. Shared understanding is not a precondition of agreement in real communities.

"very often in human communities, we agree with each other, we are persuaded, we are valuable even when we have an incomplete understanding of what it is we're agreeing about"

— 06:03

What it is shown against is a named concept from a colleague's book on how communities agree.

08:02 - The word thesis triggers no structure in a listener's head

"Thesis" is a useless instruction because it triggers no structure in a listener's head. Told a thesis, a listener has no sense of what is supposed to happen next.

"one of the words I deeply dislike in the teaching of … writing is the word thesis"

— 08:02

A listener hearing a thesis has nothing to do with it: no expectation is opened and nothing is owed a resolution. The instruction survives because it is easy to teach and easy to mark, not because it acts on the person receiving it.

09:51 - Nobody has ever understood anything through a thesis and its supporting points

The standard thesis-plus-supporting-points model is a structure nobody has ever used to understand anything. It exists on paper; audiences do not hold it while listening.

"which nobody ever had as a structure in their head for understanding things"

— 10:02

The model describes how an argument can be audited after the fact, which is a real use, and it is not how anyone comes to understand something for the first time. Teaching the audit shape as the delivery shape is the substitution that does the damage.

10:16 - A problem-based structure extends by complicating the problem rather than adding points

A problem-based structure extends over any length by complicating the problem rather than by adding points. Each added aspect renews the expectation of a solution.

"You can extend this out over any number of pages simply by making the problem more complicated, adding different aspects to it and they continually expect you to solve it."

— 10:16

This is what makes it scale. A list of supporting points runs out and each addition weakens the last; a problem can be deepened indefinitely, and every complication makes the eventual resolution worth more rather than less.

10:29 - One short speech runs the same structure three times and answers each with the same act

One short speech runs the structure three times — a nation's survival, a political idea's survival, and private grief — and answers all three with one act. Three independent reasons to accept a single solution.

"he's used a structure three times. Problem of the nation, problem of democracy, problem of grief. And he's given them one solution for all three."

— 12:55

The case in front of the room is three problems traced to three specific lines.

"you don't have to be this good to make this work"

— 13:15

Explicitly: you do not have to be this good for the technique to work.

13:57 - Organised, clear and persuasive are worthless where the thing itself is not valuable

Organised, clear and persuasive are all worthless if the thing is not valuable. Value is the gate; the others are how value gets delivered.

"organization doesn't matter if it's not valuable. Clear doesn't matter if it's not valuable. Organized doesn't matter if it's not valuable to the audience. Persuasive doesn't matter if it's not valuable."

— 13:58

The three are properties of delivery, and delivery only begins to matter once there is something worth delivering. A piece can be all three and change nothing, which is the ordinary shape of competent work that lands nowhere.

14:17 - Some audiences arrive already valuing the material, so no problem needs constructing

You do not always need to open with a problem — some audiences arrive already valuing what you are about to say. A reference work is consulted by someone who brought the problem with them.

"this does not mean you always have to begin a speech with a problem."

— 14:17

Looking something up, where an opening problem would be an obstruction.

"There are certainly texts, lots of them, where it's not only you don't need to have a problem, it's not particularly good to have a problem because the audience arrives at the text already valuing what you want to say, just say it."

— 14:45

Most writers are simply not in that situation.

15:35 - Opening on a problem is one of the oldest devices, learned before an audience can read

Opening on a problem is one of the oldest devices in the tradition, and audiences are trained into it before they can read. Story structure installs the pattern: something is wrong, so attend.

"it's one of the most common … techniques of language in the western tradition at least for 3,000 years that the way you get people's attention is you start with a problem"

— 15:37

The demonstration is epic openings; children's first storybooks, which all start with trouble.

17:15 - A problem outside the audience can be declined where one inside them cannot

Problems located outside the audience can be declined; a problem located inside them cannot easily be. "That is someone else's problem" is always available against an abstract stake.

"These two are problems which we could say are located outside the audience."

— 17:26

On the table: mourners entitled to feel nothing about the survival of a political system.

"he constructs a problem that is located in his audience. It's inside of them. This makes it much harder for the audience to say, it's not my problem."

— 18:13

Nothing always works — it is harder to decline, not impossible.

18:55 - An opening device can exist to make a room wrong in public

An opening device can exist for no purpose but to put the audience publicly in the wrong. A mistake made publicly is harder to disown, and it installs a problem the speaker can then resolve.

"I've tried to get them to make a mistake in public because it makes it harder to deny that they were wrong."

— 20:21

The case in front of the room is a pair of sentences about a dog and a cat, presented as a lesson about verbs.

The stated purpose of the exercise is not its real purpose.

20:52 - A sceptical audience grants no value to a self-introduction until it wants one

A sceptical professional audience will not grant value to a self-introduction, so the introduction is postponed until they want it. Credentials answer a question nobody has asked yet; the problem creates the question.

"they are highly skeptical that I have anything of value to offer them. So, what do I do? First 5 minutes, I make them be publicly wrong."

— 21:25

What it is shown against is highly paid specialists, obliged to attend, primed to dismiss the speaker's background.

22:56 - Each use of the technique creates a little anxiety and then relieves it

Every use of the technique creates a little anxiety and then relieves it, which is what makes the speaker valuable. The audience stays because the person who created the tension is the one promising to resolve it.

"every time you do this problem constructing technique one of the reasons you're making yourself valuable is you're causing your audience to feel some sort of anxiety or stress and they therefore want to listen to you so that you will relieve that stress"

— 23:22

A four-day session with theologians, asked directly whether this is ethical, answering "not at all — teach us more tricks".

"the way you're doing this is by triggering even in a small way anxiety in your audience so that you position yourself as being the good person who's resolving this anxiety that wouldn't have existed if you hadn't created it"

— 24:21

The speaker's own verdict is that it remains ethically troubling.

24:58 - A problem opened and closed inside one sentence re-runs the cycle at small scale

Problems are not only structural: small ones opened and closed within a sentence create value by re-running the cycle. Each micro-cycle is another completion the audience wants.

"A lot of these techniques of … creating problems, constructing problems are done in very small ways and resolved immediately."

— 25:49

The demonstration is a greeting turned into a problem rather than a courtesy.

The reader registers none of it consciously, which is the point — what they register is that reading this person is somehow worth the time.

26:34 - A question opening works only where the question is a problem

Opening with a question or a thesis only works if the question is a problem and the thesis is loaded with one. "What are the three ways to do X" is a question that constructs nothing.

On the table: two openings compared: one carrying a conflict, one carrying a list.

27:53 - A self-introduction can be grounded in instability rather than in stable credentials

A self-introduction can be grounded in instability rather than in stable credentials. The contradictions in who the speaker is become the material, rather than being smoothed away.

"His entire introduction of himself is grounded in instability."

— 28:54

The case in front of the room is an introduction built entirely on what made the speaker's identity a problem to that audience.

Usually the opposite of what speakers do.

29:25 - The word background is the most damaging in writing instruction, because stability cues nothing

"Background" is the most damaging word in writing instruction, because stable background cues nothing. Told they are getting background, an audience expects nothing and wants nothing.

"One of the words I most dislike in writing is the word background."

— 29:25

What it is shown against is writers whose word choice turns neutral and objective the moment they start an introduction.

31:31 - Cutting it is not X, it is Y for concision removes the source of the value

"It is not X, it is Y" is routinely cut for concision, and the cut removes the source of value. The experience of denial makes the audience want to know what is the case.

"You'll make this sentence much more concise and clear if you just say A is Y. Just cut this. Cut the not part."

— 32:32

What is put on the table is editors and teachers who advise deleting the negative half.

"Very often, not always, very often this is the source of value."

— 33:03

The claim is bounded: very often, not always.

34:05 - A celebrated long speech has no organisational structure and runs one move throughout

One celebrated long speech has no organisational structure and runs this move roughly thirty times. Repeated denial keeps regenerating the want, which does the work a structure would have done.

"Now, you might think it's this. It's not. It's not this. It's not this."

— 34:30

The demonstration is a speech searchable for the word "not", which appears everywhere.

36:18 - Parallelism and every sentence technique pay only once a problem is established

Parallelism and every other sentence technique only pay once a problem is established. Technique deployed before a problem exists reads as craft, and value plummets.

"Problem gets established first, then the other techniques work for you. If you use those techniques first and then get to some sort of problem later on, it's the value that plummets."

— 36:33

On the table: a passage whose parallel structures sit inside an explicitly named common problem.

Applied to flat material the techniques read as ornament, and ornament on an unmotivated sentence makes the lack of motivation more obvious rather than less.

37:32 - Parallel structure is strongest when the matching words are in tension with each other

Parallel structure is far stronger when the words in matching positions are in tension with each other. The grammar makes it easy to process while the paired words generate friction.

"he's using a grammatical consistent structure but words that are in tension with each other"

— 37:51

The case in front of the room is educated or illiterate; boulevard or alley; charity and malice, all and none.

"If you create a parallel structure and put the words in tension with each other, it typically gets a much greater response because it is again intensifying the audience's sense of problem."

— 40:14

Plain parallelism is fine, it just does less.

42:46 - Writing almost always starts from the solution rather than from the problem

Writing rarely starts with a problem; it almost always starts with the solution. A speaker knows the point they want to make and does not know what problem it addresses.

"rather than thinking that here's the thesis I have to make an argument for, you think, 'What problem could I put first that makes that thesis feel to the audience like a solution?'"

— 44:32

What it is shown against is commissioned speeches that begin with a stated main point.

The limit is stated on the spot: sometimes the problem genuinely comes first — not very often.

45:03 - Taking a word from someone's thesis and saying its opposite locates their problem

You can find someone else's problem without knowing their field, by taking a word from their thesis and saying its opposite. If a term is positive, the negative version implies an existing failure the field already knows.

"I'll take one of those words in the thesis and one thing I'll do is I'll say the opposite of it."

— 46:13

What is put on the table is specialists in fields the consultant knows nothing about, writing their own introductions within fifteen minutes.

47:16 - An unproblematic subject becomes a problem when the speaker's own prior belief is the mistake

An entirely unproblematic subject can be problematised by making the speaker's own prior belief the mistake. "Here is what I thought, and I was wrong" builds the want for the very claim that was going to be asserted anyway.

"before I say it, I'm going to make them want to know it"

— 48:48

The demonstration is a eulogy that opens on a childhood misconception before delivering its actual tribute.

49:37 - Multiple problems confuse rather than compound unless the language makes them cascade

Multiple problems at the opening can confuse rather than compound, unless the language makes them cascade. Separate problems force the audience to track which one is live.

"The problem with multiple problems is of course they can confuse each other. The readers gets lost in what problem is being addressed here."

— 50:01

On the table: a series of opening questions that build rather than sit side by side.

One speaker's three problems work because he is exceptional at it.

50:46 - Two openings on one subject differ in whether they construct one problem or two

Two openings on the same subject differ in whether they construct one problem or two. Problem then solution is sound; problem then a second problem blocking the solution is stronger.

"In our jargon, we call this the manifest problem or the obvious problem."

— 52:45

The case in front of the room is two diplomatic addresses on the same topic in the same year.

"we have a problem that would prevent us from solving this problem"

— 53:08

An opening that names the visible threat, then warns that rushing at it would be the real mistake.

It carries its own exception: nothing wrong with the single-problem version at all.

53:49 - The two-step structure says everybody sees the obvious problem and one person sees beneath it

The two-step structure carries a connotation: everybody sees the obvious problem, and I see the one underneath. It frequently runs on a visibility theme, which positions the speaker as the person who perceives more.

"everybody sees the obvious problem, but I see this problem"

— 54:12

What it is shown against is a faculty told about the structure and responding that they wanted it immediately.

The limit is stated on the spot: named bluntly as a status move.

55:34 - Problem-solution is more persuasive than argument structure, not a simplified wrapper for it

Problem-solution is not a simplified wrapper for logical argument; it is more persuasive than argument structure. The classical model treats every persuasion as a syllogism with the steps hidden, which misdescribes how language works.

"In my judgment, problem solution structure is wildly more persuasive than argument structure."

— 57:06

What is put on the table is a two-sentence political claim: practitioners leaving the profession, therefore this reform.

"They are dangerously wrong when they say problem solution is just a kind of a superficial covering for the actual argument going on. They're wrong."

— 57:56

The claim is bounded: stated as a disagreement with a far greater thinker, not a refutation.

59:33 - The problem technique is almost entirely absent from the teaching of writing

The problem technique is almost entirely absent from the teaching of writing and speaking. Standard advice lists jokes, stories and introductions, and never names what makes them work.

"in the teaching of speeches and essays, problems the problem technique is virtually invisible"

— 59:48

The demonstration is search results and handbooks on how to open a speech.

On the table: a rule recommending a broad opening statement, illustrated by a sentence containing several problems; a rule recommending a personal story, illustrated by one full of trouble.

Offered as a genuine puzzle the speaker cannot explain.

1:01:58 - A failed opening gets made more general, which is where the dawn-of-time sentence comes from

An opening that fails is then made more general, which produces the dawn-of-time sentence. The diagnosis is wrong: the sentence was never insufficiently general, it simply had no problem in it.

"The problem isn't that the sentence isn't general enough. Problem is it doesn't construct a problem for the audience."

— 1:02:07

Openings beginning "throughout time, people have…".

The instinct is to zoom out when the first attempt does not land, and each zoom takes the opening further from anyone's actual situation until it arrives at the beginning of time.

1:03:27 - A speaker who cannot deliver dramatic language keeps the structure and tones the rhetoric down

A speaker who cannot deliver dramatic language can still use the structure; tone the rhetoric down and keep the problem. The structure does the work; the diction only amplifies it.

"We didn't take the problem out. We just toned down the rhetoric."

— 1:04:56

A head of government whose staff refused the dramatic phrasing, where the problem stayed and the rhetoric was softened.

It carries its own exception: often less powerful, but it still works.

1:05:26 - A text moves an audience from where they are, rather than moving an idea between heads

A text does not move an idea from the writer's head to the reader's; it moves the audience from where they are to where you want them. The writer is not in the second picture at all.

"Content is not what your text is about. Content is a technique by which you get done what you need to get done."

— 1:06:52

What it is shown against is a diagram contrasting the two models.

1:07:53 - An audience that already agrees needs the problem made shared or made the speaker's own

With an audience that already agrees, make the problem shared — or make it the speaker's own. A sympathetic audience will adopt the speaker's problem as theirs; an unsympathetic one will not.

"instead of saying to the audience, 'You have a problem,' they can go so far as to say, 'I have a problem.'"

— 1:08:51

What is put on the table is speeches to audiences who already support the speaker.

Telling a neutral audience "I have a problem" invites "that's your problem".

1:09:20 - Where the solution is rejected outright, the question becomes what one piece can do

When the audience rejects the solution outright, stop asking what the argument should be and ask what this one piece can do. A position that cannot be reached in one attempt is not reached by making the same attempt ten times.

"if at the end of a process we want them to agree with this, my question is then strategic. What can this speech do?"

— 1:10:26

The demonstration is work on contested policy communication, mapped as a ten-step journey on sticky notes.

Audiences resisting a position because of what accepting it would say about them.

1:12:28 - Making opposition harder rather than creating advocates is a legitimate goal for a piece

Sometimes all a piece can do is make opposition harder rather than create advocates, and that is a legitimate goal. Partial movement compounds across a sequence; total conversion in one attempt does not happen.

"All you're trying to do at that point is make opposition harder. Make it harder for them to oppose what you want to do rather than turn them into advocates"

— 1:12:32

Naming the goal in advance changes what the piece has to carry, and it removes most of the pressure to overclaim, which is what usually destroys credibility with the very audience being addressed.

Personal Branding Lessons

A seminar on constructing the problem a reader is already carrying.

Work backwards from the solution you already hold and publish that, never a thesis

Almost nobody starts with a problem; they start with something they have worked out and then look for a way to introduce it. That order is fine — what fails is publishing the conclusion as a thesis, because a thesis triggers no structure in anyone's head. Take the thing you already know and work out which problem it dissolves, then open on that. The tell is that the first line stops sounding like a topic and starts sounding like something wrong. 42:46

Postpone your credentials until the audience wants them

A sceptical professional audience grants no value to a self-introduction, because nothing has yet happened that makes your background relevant. Lead with the problem, let them feel it, and let the introduction arrive as the answer to a question they are now asking. Credentials placed first read as a claim; the same credentials placed fourth read as relief. You will see it in who replies: people asking what you would do, rather than people noting that you seem qualified. 20:52

Keep the not-X-but-Y construction that a concision pass would cut

It is not a problem of resources, it is a problem of sequence — that shape is routinely deleted by anyone editing for tightness, and deleting it removes the thing creating the value. The negated half is not padding; it is where the reader's existing belief gets named and set aside. Write the construction deliberately and defend it against your own editing pass. The evidence is that the sentence people quote back to you is almost always the one with the not in it. 31:31

Cut the word background, because stable background cues nothing

Background is the most damaging word in writing instruction: it instructs you to open with stability, and stability signals that nothing here requires attention. Whatever you were going to call background is either problem construction or it should be deleted. Go through your draft and mark every passage that exists to set the scene, then rewrite each one as a tension or remove it. What is left starts where the reader already is. 29:25

Put the problem inside the audience rather than out in the world

A problem stated about the industry, the market or the culture can be acknowledged and declined — genuinely interesting, not mine. A problem located inside the person reading cannot be declined in the same way, because they are already carrying it. The move is to take the abstract version and find its expression in their week. The picturable sign is a reply that starts by describing their own situation. 17:15

Run micro-problems inside sentences, not one structural problem only

The technique is not only structural. A small tension opened and closed inside a single sentence re-runs the same anxiety-and-relief cycle at a scale the reader barely notices, and it is that cycle repeating that makes a writer feel valuable to read. Look for places where you have stated something flat and ask what expectation could be raised and settled in the same breath. Done well it reads as pace rather than technique. 26:34

Put opposing words in the matching slots of a parallel

Parallel structure is taught as a rhythm device and used as decoration, which is why most of it does nothing. It is strongest when the words sitting in the matching positions are in tension with each other, so the shape carries an argument rather than a beat. Build the parallel, then check what occupies each matching slot and swap in the opposition. And none of it pays until a problem is already established. 37:32

Name the problem underneath the obvious one

A two-step opening — here is what everyone can see, and here is what is actually happening — carries a connotation nothing else does: everybody sees the first, and the writer sees the second. That is the whole positioning move, executed in two sentences and without a claim about expertise. Find the obvious version of your problem, state it plainly, then state the one beneath it. The evidence it worked is being quoted as the person who said the second thing. 53:49

Aim one piece at one step of the journey rather than at conversion

When an audience rejects the solution outright, the useful question stops being what the argument should be and becomes what this single piece can realistically do. Sometimes the honest answer is that it can make opposition slightly harder rather than create an advocate, and that is a legitimate goal worth writing for. Pick the one step and aim everything at it. It also removes most of the reason to overclaim. 1:09:20

Questions

Each answer ends at the moment in the recording where it is given.

Is clear writing the foundation everything else rests on?

No — the dependency is widely taught backwards. Things can be persuasive without being clear, and valuable without being clear, and an institution that says it wants clearer writing wants something else: a grant that gets funded, an article that gets published. Neither is achieved by clarity alone. There is also a cost to over-pursuing it, since people agree and are persuaded all the time while understanding what they have agreed to only incompletely. 03:26

What should I actually do with my thesis?

Turn it into the solution to a problem and put the problem first. The word itself is described as one the speaker deeply dislikes, because a thesis triggers no structure in a listener's head — told what you think, they have no sense of what is meant to happen next. A problem does the opposite: a head holding one is already reaching for the answer, which means the same sentence you were going to write arrives as something wanted. 08:02

Do I always have to open with a problem?

No, and the exception is genuine. Some audiences arrive already valuing what you are about to say — the person looking something up brought the problem with them, and constructing one for them would just be an obstruction. The catch is that almost nobody who needs help with their writing is in that position, because the defining feature of it is an audience that already wanted the thing. 14:17

Why does my audience shrug at the problem I keep naming?

Because it is located outside them. A problem belonging to an industry, a platform or a category is always declinable — that is someone else's concern, not mine — and in the wrong setting naming it is worse than useless. Relocating it inside the audience makes it much harder to disown. The hedge matters: nothing always works, but it becomes harder for them to feel it is not theirs. 17:15

When should I introduce myself?

After they want to know. A sceptical audience presented with a self-introduction immediately prices the speaker, and for anyone with the wrong accent, institution or background, that pricing goes badly before a word of substance has landed. The alternative demonstrated here is to open by making the room publicly wrong about something small, which installs a problem and makes the identity of the person about to resolve it suddenly interesting. 18:55

Is creating tension in order to relieve it manipulative?

The session says yes, and teaches it anyway. The mechanism is stated without euphemism: you cause a small amount of anxiety, the audience stays because you are the one promising to relieve it, and the anxiety would not have existed had you not produced it. Asked this directly, a theology faculty four days into a session on it answered "not at all — teach us more tricks". The speaker's own verdict is that it remains ethically troubling. 22:56

Is opening with a question a good idea?

Only if the question is a problem. "Where do we go from here" carries a conflict; "what are the three ways to do X" is a list with a question mark on it, and no amount of placement makes it do the work. The same test applies to a thesis: it functions as an opening when it is loaded with trouble, and not when it is merely a statement of position. 24:58

Should I start with background?

No — and the word itself is named as one of the most damaging in writing instruction. Its damage is to your vocabulary: told to supply background, a writer becomes neutral and objective at exactly the point where instability was needed. Ask what an audience is cued to want when they hear that context is coming. The answer is nothing, and they are already looking for the part where the value starts. 29:25

My editor keeps cutting "it's not X, it's Y" — should I let them?

Usually not. The cut is always made for concision and it removes the part creating the value, because the experience of a denial is what makes a reader want to know what is the case. The strongest form denies something the audience currently believes, which turns the sentence from an addition into a correction of a mistake they were making. One celebrated long speech runs this move roughly thirty times in place of a structure. 31:31

How do I find an angle when all I have is a conclusion?

Think backward. You almost never begin with a problem; you begin with a point you want to make, and the problem gets reconstructed afterwards so the point can land as its solution. The mechanical version: take a word from your conclusion and say its opposite, then ask what makes that opposite happen. It works in fields the person asking knows nothing about, because the expertise being supplied is about words rather than about subjects. 42:46

What if my subject genuinely has no conflict in it?

Make your own prior belief the mistake. The hardest available case is a eulogy for a revered figure, and the version that works opens on a childhood misconception — a hero imagined as enormous and armoured, who turned out to be small and gentle. The tribute that follows is identical to the one that could have been asserted flatly, and it now arrives as something the audience wanted rather than as one more claim being handed to them. 47:16

How do I become the person who sees what others miss?

By naming the problem underneath the obvious one. Where a straightforward piece says here is the visible threat and here is what to do, the stronger structure says here is the visible threat — and here is the thing that will prevent us from ever addressing it. The two-step version frequently runs on a theme of visibility, and it carries a connotation the session states bluntly: everybody sees the obvious problem, and I see the one underneath it. 49:37

What do I do with an audience that already agrees with me?

Move where the problem sits. Instead of locating it out in the world or inside them, make it shared — our problem rather than yours — which is available precisely because they are already with you. With a genuinely sympathetic audience you can go one step further and make it your own problem, which would be fatal anywhere else: a neutral audience told "I have a problem" replies that it is indeed your problem. 1:03:27

What do I do with an audience that will never accept my conclusion?

Stop aiming at the conclusion. If the destination cannot be reached in one piece, repeating the piece ten times produces ten pieces they disagree with. Work backwards from where you want them to where they actually are, identify the single step immediately in front of them, and problematise only that — usually the real resistance is an identity or an affiliation rather than the argument. The honest goal is often to make opposition harder rather than to create advocates. 1:09:20

Sources

The Gettysburg Address (Part 2) with Larry McEnerney

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