The Gettysburg Address, as You’ve Never Considered It Before

Larry McEnerney | Professional Speechwriters Association

Abstract

A writing-programme director reads a very short and very famous nineteenth-century address as a piece of functional language, and uses it to argue against the ideology that splits the world into an ideal realm and the one anybody actually lives in. That split is what makes preparation look like dishonesty and persuasion look like a compromise, and the reading is designed to take both charges apart.

• Writing for the general reader is meaningless, because no such reader exists.
• A sequence coherent to the writer can be incoherent to everyone else, undetectably.
• Language creates experiences rather than containing content.
• Enriching the problem replaces giving background, and solving one replaces making a discovery.
• A solution has to be located where its problem was located.

Below, the reading is mapped in the order it was delivered: forty chapter summaries, each headed with the moment it begins and the claim made there, with the lines that carry it quoted in place. The middle stretch is mechanical — borrowed structures of time and space, subject consistency, the thematic string, and the three words that are the call to action. The last third turns to problem construction and then to what the strongest move in the speech actually costs the people hearing it. The personal-branding layer and the questions follow.

Chapter summaries

02:23 - Splitting the world into an ideal realm and a real one does deep harm

The ideology splitting the world into an ideal realm and the one we live in is deeply harmful. Whatever is typical becomes not merely common but the norm, and everything else is measured by its distance from it.

"I believe our ideology very much our ethical ideology is based on a notion of … these two realms. a realm of absolute truth, perfection, ideal and the realm in which we actually live in."

— 02:39

The demonstration is accommodation framed as departure from a correct way of being.

"the right way to do it. And then anything that doesn't fit that right way is at best regrettable"

— 03:24

Named as the way ethics will be thought about for a lifetime regardless.

04:15 - Establishing a norm turns every other case into an exception, even the healthier one

Establishing anything as the norm makes every other case an exception, including where the exception is the healthier practice. The exception framing reinforces the norm each time it is granted.

On the table: a speech principle adopted by hundreds of institutions, against how language actually built community in a residence hall.

It is narrower than it sounds: offered as a personal objection, with regret about his own part in it.

06:53 - The same dialectic is weaponised to make any prepared speech dishonest by definition

The same dialectic is weaponised to position any prepared speech as dishonest by definition. Authenticity is placed in the upper realm, so preparation becomes evidence of deception.

"people who think what you do is inescapably shabby because what language should be is the authentic expression of a speaker"

— 07:38

The case in front of the room is a politician working visibly against a prepared text on stage.

08:21 - A 278-word text is the best available demonstration of language where every word works

278 words is the best available demonstration of functional language: every word accomplishes something. Language is judged by what it does rather than by its relation to a truth behind it.

"I'm going to be argued that these 278 words are the best example I know of using language functionally. That is every word accomplishes something."

— 08:29

Nothing in it is ornamental. Every word is doing a job for the people in front of it, which is what makes it usable as a demonstration rather than as an object of reverence.

08:55 - Meaning is communal, arriving from shared use rather than from a word's relation to its object

Meaning is communal — it comes from shared use, not from a word's relationship to the thing it names. A word means what a community does with it, which is countless functions rather than one.

"The meaning of the word podium in all other words comes from the way that we share it and what we do with it."

— 09:14

What is put on the table is the meaning of an ordinary object's name.

09:33 - Saying only what one thinks is no defence, because language always carries an ethical dimension

"I only said what I think" is not a defence, because language always carries an ethical dimension. If meaning is communal, effect is not an unfortunate side issue; it is what the language is.

"it means that languages always has an ethical dimension always"

— 10:06

The claim that offence taken is the hearer's problem.

Most uses are trivial enough not to need the thought — that is not the same as being exempt.

12:27 - A call to action at the very end is the hardest structure to execute

The call to action sits at the very end, which is the hardest structure to execute. Most writers cannot hold an audience to a payoff they have not been promised.

"There's a lot of problems with saving your call to action, your big message for the end."

— 13:43

On the table: textbooks that simply advise against point-last structure.

Everything before it has to hold, because a reader who leaves early never reaches the ask. That is the structure's whole difficulty and the reason most writing puts the ask earlier and settles for less.

14:03 - The five-paragraph essay is replicated invisibly inside adult writing and fails there

The five-paragraph essay is replicated invisibly inside adult writing, and it is the source of much of its failure. It teaches the thesis at the end of the introduction, to act as a framework for everything after.

"they are taught from high school the five paragraph essay … It is a devil."

— 14:08

The case in front of the room is highly accomplished professionals whose work fails without their knowing why.

15:33 - Reading is an experience rather than a model being filled in, and listening more so

People do not process language by fitting it into an abstract model — reading is an experience, and listening far more so. Coherence is felt as it happens, not assembled against a plan.

"That's not the way people process language. We do not process language by having abstract models and then fitting in the language to the model."

— 15:33

An abstract model can be filled in afterwards by someone auditing the argument. It is not what happens to a person moving through sentences in real time, and it is even less what happens to someone listening, who cannot go back.

16:38 - An audience needs this step to feel consistent with the last, not to know the destination

An audience does not need to know where you are going; they need this step to feel consistent with the last. Local consistency is what sustains attention; global structure is invisible to them.

"They don't need to know where you're going. They need to know that this step feels consistent and coherent with the last step I took."

— 16:45

Knowing the destination is the writer's need, not the audience's. What the audience needs is local: that this sentence follows the last one in a way they can feel without being told.

17:58 - A sequence coherent to the writer can be incoherent to everyone else, undetectably

A sequence perfectly coherent to the writer can be incoherent to everyone else, and the writer cannot feel the difference. The writer knows the connecting term, so every step feels obvious from inside.

"This is how a lot of people write when they try to make something point last. That is they push … out sentence after sentence, paragraph after paragraph that is coherent to the writer."

— 18:42

The demonstration is four words, revealed to share an obvious connection that almost nobody in the room had found.

"I know what the coherence is. And so all the time I'm putting these words out, I feel perfect coherence. My challenge is to predict whether you can feel it."

— 18:56

On the table: the thesis-first instruction, applied by writers who know no alternative.

20:48 - One sequence is coherent to a whole room where another reaches half of it

One sequence is coherent to everyone in a room and another to between a third and a half of it. Coherence that must be brought in splits an audience invisibly.

"whether it serves as a sequence of coherence and experience of coherence depends on the audience"

— 21:42

On the table: a counting sequence against a prime-number sequence, with hands raised for each.

21:53 - Writing for the general reader is meaningless, because no such reader exists

The first question about any text is who the audience is, and writing for the general reader is meaningless because there is no such person. Language functions inside a specific community, so there is nothing to aim at without one.

"Talking about writing to the general reader is dumb because there are no such people. You're writing to a specific audience."

— 22:12

The case in front of the room is writers retreating into objective diction to avoid thinking about a complicated audience.

A complicated audience is worked with, not defined away.

23:00 - A text can teach its own coherence, so the audience needs to bring nothing

A text can teach its own coherence, so the audience needs to have brought nothing with them. The pattern is established inside the piece and then relied upon.

"that repetition of the word promise was creating a structure of coherence in his audience"

— 25:05

What it is shown against is an alternating sequence everyone completes correctly.

What is put on the table is a political address repeating one word twenty-seven times.

25:24 - Past, present and future in each movement's first words is a structure an audience owns

Past, present and future in the first words of each movement is a structure the audience already owns. Given two terms of a known sequence, the third is anticipated unconsciously.

"One of the things students arrive at university is what we call the dawn of time introduction."

— 26:00

What is put on the table is three openings marking three tenses.

"If you start with birth and you then go to death, what are we going to end with? Rebirth."

— 29:54

The demonstration is essays opening "since ancient times".

30:24 - Asking whether the writer knew what he was doing is the wrong question

Asking whether the writer knew what he was doing is the wrong question: doing it is knowing it. Treating articulable knowledge as the real kind puts practice in the lower realm and the commentator above the practitioner.

"by doing it. And it's this idiotic academic language … which is that abstract knowledge is what counts and doing of it is in this realm of the shabby, the fallen, the incomplete"

— 30:47

The ancient argument that someone unable to define courage cannot know what it is.

"when people ask me, did he know? Of course he did. Could he say it? Thank God he couldn't. That's the job of hacks like me."

— 32:10

It is stated with its limit: stated with unusual force as a personal position.

32:33 - Language creates experiences rather than containing content

Language does not have the job of containing content; its job is to create experiences. An apparently redundant phrase is doing work a content test cannot see.

"It is not the job of language to contain content. It is the job of language to create experiences."

— 33:20

On the table: editors cutting words not needed for the meaning.

Content is what the language is made of, and the experience is what it is for. Treating the first as the point produces writing that is accurate and inert.

34:10 - A spatial sequence narrows from continent to nation to ground to a single grave

A spatial sequence narrows from continent to nation to battlefield to a portion of it to a grave. Each step focuses the audience further in, so the widening close feels earned.

"Look at how many times the word here appears in this speech. There's only 278 words in this speech."

— 36:37

The case in front of the room is five nouns traced across a single page.

"Now, is it crucial to the speech? No, of course not. Does it add to the reader sense of coherence…"

— 37:43

What it is shown against is the taught opening that begins broad and narrows to a thesis.

It carries its own exception: not crucial to the speech; it adds to the experience of coherence.

38:01 - Almost every sentence taking the same subject is what produces the feeling of coherence

Almost every sentence takes the same subject, and that consistency is what produces the feeling of coherence. Readers seek familiarity at the start of sentences; consistency is what they are seeking.

"one of the things I hate when my students walked into class is that their teachers taught them to vary the openings of their sentences"

— 39:19

What it is shown against is subjects underlined sentence by sentence across the speech.

"Readers seek in the beginning of sentences consistency and familiarity. One of the strongest things you can do to create an experience of coherence in a reader's mind is to use consistent subjects."

— 39:36

A thirteen-year-old who would otherwise begin every sentence with the same pronoun.

"it can be a good exercise for him. It doesn't make for good pros for readers."

— 40:20

The limit is stated on the spot: a good exercise for the writer; not good prose for the reader.

40:29 - The subject position makes a sentence clearer, where shorter and active do not

Neither shorter nor active makes a sentence clearer; the subject position does, by aligning the reader's focus. A reader who wants to think about the object has to reprocess the sentence to re-centre it.

"It is simply not true that sentences are clearer or more concise because of the number of words in the sentence or because they use active verbs."

— 40:49

What is put on the table is the dog-and-cat pair, addressed to an audience that cares about cats.

"the function of a subject in English is to align the reader focus. It's to control their thinking."

— 41:15

The demonstration is colleagues who forbid the passive while using it constantly.

43:10 - A longer piece needs two to four focal points returned to constantly, not one

A longer piece needs two to four focal points returned to constantly, not one. One subject is possible only in something very short; more than four stops cohering.

"in a longer, more complicated speech, you do this by creating multiple focal points for the readers. Speeches are rarely about one thing."

— 43:10

The worry that repetition is boring is answered by the rest of the sentence, not by varying the subject.

44:13 - A speech that appears to be a eulogy is about the audience rather than the dead

The speech appears to be a eulogy and is not about the dead — it is about the audience. The subject position orients the audience toward what the speaker needs them to think about, without ever saying so.

"The Gettysburg address seems to be a eulogy, but of course it's not. It's not about the soldiers who have died. It's about us."

— 44:24

A close reading in which the recurring subject is the listeners themselves.

"The function of subjects earlier on is to set up the subject that comes at the end. That's how you choose the subjects up here"

— 46:02

A common failure in which the closing subject has never appeared before.

Announcing this would have been ethically better and practically fatal.

47:00 - Content is a technique for accomplishing what a piece needs to accomplish

A speech is never about content; content is a technique for accomplishing what the piece needs to accomplish. A required subject limits the choice of content without changing content's role.

"My radical point is speeches are never about content. Content is a technique."

— 47:00

The objection that a speech has to be about a particular thing.

48:04 - A thematic string runs one word and its associates through a whole text

A thematic string runs one word and its associates through the whole text. Listeners build coherence out of memory, not out of structure, so they need words to hold on to.

"That was good advice for me as a writer because it forced me to learn a few new words … Terrible for your listeners."

— 49:07

What it is shown against is one word and two substitutes, traced from the first sentence to the last.

What is put on the table is undergraduates who object to the repetition on being shown it.

51:49 - Three words carry more than a tenth of the text and hold the call to action

Three words are more than ten per cent of the whole text, and they are the call to action. The message is installed by density rather than announced as a thesis.

"The Gettysburg address has 278 words. More than 10% more than 30 words are three words repeated over and over again. We dedicate here."

— 51:49

What is put on the table is thirty words out of 278.

"the difficulty that people have when they write is because of the way they've been taught, they are reluctant to use language throughout a text or a speech that sets up that call to action"

— 52:08

Writers are reluctant to do this because of how they were taught.

52:26 - Problem-solution is the most powerful source of coherence and the least taught

Problem-solution is the most powerful source of coherence, and the one most needed and least taught. Background and generalisation create neither coherence nor motivation.

"If you give the solution first and then give the problem, the solution doesn't feel like a … solution. It just feels like a thesis."

— 53:28

It is the most powerful source of coherence available and the one least likely to have been taught, which is why so much competent writing is organised and still does nothing.

53:50 - The problem must be phrased so an audience absorbs it as their own

The problem must be phrased so the audience absorbs it as theirs, and problem and solution language must align. Misaligned language breaks the felt connection between the two.

"The problem needs to be stated in language that the audience absorbs it as their problem or a problem they care about and the language of the problem the language solution has to align."

— 53:50

An audience that hears a problem stated in someone else's terms will agree it is a problem and do nothing about it. The phrasing has to let them recognise it as theirs.

54:23 - Enriching the problem replaces giving background, and solving one replaces making a discovery

Background is replaced by enrichment of the problem, and discovery by the solving of one. Background cues neutrality; a problem cues wanting.

"don't give background enrich the problem … don't make a point solve a problem"

— 54:26

The case in front of the room is prize bodies constructing a problem before describing any laureate's work.

Both substitutions point the same way: away from what the writer has and toward what the audience lacks. That is the whole reorientation, stated as two editing instructions.

54:41 - The same work is problematised twice, practically for one audience and intellectually for another

The same work is problematised in two registers: a practical problem for a general audience, an intellectual one for the field. The problem is chosen for who is reading, not for what the work is.

What it is shown against is public summaries against technical ones from the same institution.

56:15 - Problem language is not neutral, and the words that cue it can be collected

Problem language is not neutral, and the words that cue it can be underlined and collected. War, testing, endure are doing the work that background language cannot.

What is put on the table is an exercise: go through your field's writing and underline the words that cue problem.

The claim is bounded: writers told to give background unconsciously switch to objective diction.

57:54 - A solution has to be located where its problem was located

The solution must be located where the problem was located. A call to action sited somewhere other than the problem creates unconscious incoherence.

"What's so important here is the word nation showing up twice. That is the solution. The call to action is located in the same place the problem was located."

— 57:54

The demonstration is the same noun appearing in both the problem and the resolution.

A solution that arrives somewhere other than where the problem was raised reads as a change of subject, and the audience quietly disengages rather than objecting.

1:00:55 - A problem sitting in the world leaves a grieving audience entitled to decline it

Both those problems sit in the world, and an audience in real grief is entitled to say so. Abstract stakes cannot compete with a present private loss.

"If I were in that audience, I would unconsciously think I don't give a damn. That's your problem."

— 1:01:53

On the table: mourners addressed about national survival while carrying a personal death.

"There are lots of techniques for this. They're all ethically implicated in my view. I teach them. I use them."

— 1:02:48

It is narrower than it sounds: stated as techniques the speaker both teaches and uses.

1:03:15 - A puzzling line of agreement is an apology for what is about to be done

The puzzling line of agreement is an apology for what is about to be done. Full concession makes the reversal land and marks the speaker's own discomfort.

"I think what he's doing there is apologizing for what he's about to do. I think he knew exactly what he was doing and he regretted the fact that he was about to do it."

— 1:03:39

A sentence stating that the ceremony is altogether fitting and proper.

It carries its own exception: offered as a reading, not as established fact.

1:04:10 - The commonest instrument of problem construction is a single connective word

The next word is the most common word in problem construction. The audience is fine, hears it, and knows something is wrong.

"The next word is the most common word in problem constructing. It's a word you should just not underline, but circle and put flares around."

— 1:04:10

What it is shown against is a single conjunction opening the central reversal.

It is small, unremarkable and does more structural work than any other word available, which is why it survives every concision pass without being noticed.

1:05:26 - Most texts need two arguments, and the first argues that the audience has a problem

Most texts need two arguments, and the first one argues that the audience has a problem. Professionals told they have a problem ask why they should agree that they do.

The passage arguing that the ground is already consecrated beyond anyone's power to add to it.

The claim is bounded: trivial in most cases; profound here.

1:06:56 - One call to action answers three separately constructed problems

The call to action is the solution to three separately constructed problems. Three independent wantings, one resolution.

"the genius is they all have the same solution"

— 1:07:05

Described as beyond anything the speaker has attempted.

Three problems, constructed separately across the text, converge on one act. That convergence is what makes a closing feel earned rather than appended, and it is built from the opening onward.

1:08:55 - Problem-solution injects instability into people who will then act to remove it

Problem-solution works by injecting instability into people who will act to remove it. The urge to dissipate tension is what makes them want the ending.

"people have a very deep urge not to experience problems, anxiety, instability. They want to get rid of instability. When you construct a problem, you're injecting instability or tension into them."

— 1:09:06

Most uses are trivial; this one is not.

Instability is not a mood the text creates for effect; it is a condition the audience will move to resolve. The mechanism works precisely because nobody enjoys holding an open problem.

1:10:57 - The defence is that the cost was judged worth paying, not that the cause was good

The defence is not that the cause was good, but that he judged the cost worth paying and carried the judgement himself. An ideal held in the upper realm lets a person skip the weighing entirely.

The case in front of the room is a leader described as refusing the comfort of his own principles.

1:11:42 - Normative ideals make thinking easier, which is what makes them dangerous

Normative ideals make thinking easier, which is what makes them dangerous. Having a principle to apply removes the obligation to deal with the particular situation.

"If someone believes in free speech and they have a complicated situation come to them, they've actually made their life easier."

— 1:11:52

What it is shown against is people who resolve complicated cases by naming the principle they hold.

1:13:25 - Audiences want the two-level structure, and confirming it is how they are persuaded

Audiences want the two-level structure, you can persuade them by confirming it, and the speaker admits to using it. The simplification is what they find reassuring, and it is available as a device.

What is put on the table is political rhetoric positioning the past as an absolute to return to.

The long-term hope is to be rid of it, not to keep exploiting it.

Personal Branding Lessons

A reading of a very short address as functional language rather than sacred text.

Stop treating preparation as a compromise of authenticity

There is an old ideology that divides the world into an ideal realm and the one we live in, and it is what lets anyone dismiss a prepared line as dishonest by definition. Preparation is not the opposite of sincerity; it is what you do when the thing you are saying matters enough to get right. Write the sentence, test the sentence, keep the sentence. The tell that the ideology has you is that you feel you ought to apologise for having thought about it. 06:53

Write for the audience you have, because there is no general reader

The first question about any piece is who is reading it, and the general reader is a fiction that lets a writer avoid answering. Every real audience brings a particular set of references, a particular vocabulary and a particular set of things they already believe. Name the people you are writing for specifically enough that you could picture one of them scrolling. The evidence it worked is that the replies come from that group rather than from nobody in particular. 21:53

Assume your connections are invisible to everyone but you

A sequence can be perfectly coherent to the person who wrote it and incoherent to between a third and a half of the room, and the writer cannot feel the difference from the inside. Knowing the material is exactly what makes the gaps invisible. So build the coherence into the text rather than relying on it being felt: repeat the word, hold the subject, lay the sequence down explicitly. Read it to one person outside your field and watch where they hesitate. 17:58

Keep two to four recurring subjects and return to them constantly

A short piece can hold a single focal point, and anything longer needs two to four, returned to often enough that the reader always knows what the paragraph is about. Almost every sentence taking the same subject is what produces the feeling of coherence, not clever transitions. List your focal points before drafting and check the finished piece against the list. If a section has drifted onto a fifth subject, that is where people stop. 43:10

Run a thematic string so the call to action has appeared throughout

The strongest closings are not surprises; they are the arrival of something that has been running through the whole piece. One word and its close associates, repeated far more often than feels comfortable, does that work. Choose the word your ask depends on and thread it from the first paragraph. When the ask finally lands it should read as inevitable rather than as a pivot. 48:04

Delete the word background and enrich the problem instead

Background instructs you to open on stability, and stability tells a reader that nothing here needs them. Whatever you were going to call background is either problem construction or it is deletable. Go through the draft, find every passage that exists to set the scene, and either rewrite it as a tension the reader holds or cut it. The piece then starts where the reader already is, which is the only place it can start. 54:23

Site your solution exactly where you sited your problem

If the problem was located in the reader's week, the solution has to land in the reader's week; if the problem was located in the field, the solution belongs there. Problems and solutions that sit in different places read as a change of subject, and the reader quietly disengages. Check the two against each other before publishing — same people, same scale, same language. The sign it worked is that nobody asks what this has to do with them. 57:54

Argue for the problem before you argue for the answer

Most pieces need two arguments and only ever make one. The first argument is that the audience has a problem at all, and skipping it is why good answers get ignored. Spend the opening establishing that the thing is genuinely wrong and genuinely theirs, then spend the rest on what to do. You will notice the difference in the objections you get: people arguing about the solution rather than about whether any of it matters. 1:05:26

Bear the judgement rather than hiding behind the cause

The strongest move in the speech heightens grief rather than soothing it, and tells people that the thing they came to do cannot be done — because it serves what has to happen next. That is a real cost imposed on real people, and the defence is not that the cause was good. It is that the cost was judged worth paying and the judgement was carried personally. When you use the same machinery, own the same way. 1:10:57

Questions

Each answer ends at the moment in the recording where it is given.

Does using a script, a writer or a prepared structure make me inauthentic?

Only under an ideology the session spends its first ten minutes attacking: an upper realm of truth and authenticity, and a lower one containing everything actually done. That split is what allows a politician to position anybody working from a prepared text as deceptive by definition. The counter-position is that language is communal — meaning comes from shared use, not from a private relationship with truth — which makes a prepared text no less genuine than an unprepared one, and makes both of them carry responsibility. 02:23

Why does my writing make perfect sense to me and not to anyone else?

Because you are holding the connecting term the whole time. Four words offered one at a time — cup, marble, birthday, ice cream — leave most of a room with no pattern at all, and the moment the word "cakes" arrives it is obvious. The person who knew it all along cannot feel the gap, which is precisely the problem: the writer experiences perfect coherence while producing none, and has no internal signal that anything is missing. 17:58

Who am I actually writing for?

A specific audience, always — writing for the general reader is called meaningless on the grounds that no such person exists. The demonstration is two number sequences, one that everybody in a room can continue and one that between a third and a half can, with no way to tell which from the front of the room. The temptation when an audience is complicated is to retreat into neutral objective language, which is a way of not thinking about them rather than a way of reaching them. 20:48

Should I cut words that are not needed for the meaning?

Not automatically. The phrase most editors would delete from the famous opening line is the one that starts a spatial sequence running through the whole speech. The principle behind keeping it is stated flatly: it is not the job of language to contain content, it is the job of language to create experiences. A content test cannot see what a word is doing, because the work is happening in the reader rather than on the page. 32:33

Should I vary how my sentences begin?

No. The start of a sentence is where a reader looks for something familiar, which makes consistency of subject one of the strongest coherence devices available and variation the direct opposite of what is wanted there. The instruction exists for a real reason — it forces a young writer to acquire vocabulary — and that is a good exercise for the writer rather than good prose for the reader. 38:01

What does "concise" actually mean?

The time a reader takes to process the page, not the number of words on it. Both standard justifications for preferring the shorter, active version of a sentence are called simply false; what governs the feeling of clarity is the subject position, whose function is to align the reader's focus. An audience that came to think about one thing and is handed a sentence about another has to re-centre it silently, and that cost is invisible in a word count. 40:29

How many things can one piece be about?

Two to four, in anything of normal length. A single sustained subject is possible only at extreme brevity. Beyond that, pick a handful of focal points and return to them constantly — and when someone objects that this will be boring, the answer is that the subject position exists to create coherence and the rest of the sentence exists to create interest. Shifting subjects for variety produces incoherence rather than interest. 43:10

Why does my call to action feel tacked on?

Because its subject has probably never appeared before. When the thing you are finally asking for turns up in the subject position for the first time at the end, the audience feels the disconnection without being able to name it. The reversal is that earlier subjects should be chosen because of what the closing subject needs to do — which means the call to action is decided before the opening is written. 45:02

How often should I repeat my central idea?

Repeat the word, not the idea. Listeners and skimmers build coherence out of memory rather than out of structure, and memory holds words. The string can be extended with any term the audience will associate with the dominant one, and the audience is actively hunting for it rather than tolerating it. The instruction never to repeat a word in a paragraph is granted its one real purpose — building a young writer's vocabulary — and rejected for what it does to a listener. 48:04

Should I open with background?

Virtually never. The word is named as one the speaker hates, and the damage is to diction: told to supply context, a writer becomes neutral and objective at exactly the point tension was needed, and neutral language cues nothing. Enrich the problem instead — and the words that cue problem can be collected by underlining them in the successful writing of your own field, which is the same audit applied to a different target. 54:23

What do I do when my audience does not accept that they have a problem?

Argue for the problem first. Most writers produce one argument, for their conclusion, and a professional audience told it has a problem responds instantly with the question of why it should agree that it does. If that goes unanswered, nothing after it lands. In the speech under discussion, the argument for the problem is an entire passage explaining why the mourners cannot do the thing they came to do — delivered before any solution is offered. 1:05:26

Is it manipulative to create tension deliberately?

The session says yes, and says so about its own subject matter. The mechanism is that people have a deep urge to remove instability, so constructing a problem injects tension they will then act to discharge — which means you produce the anxiety and supply the relief. Applied at full power to an audience already grieving, it consists of telling them the method they brought for their grief has failed. It is described as ethically appalling by someone who admits to having done a smaller version of it. 1:08:55

Sources

The Gettysburg Address, as You’ve Never Considered It Before

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